I'm on the road with my dream in a cart, pulling it along into reality. This is the chronicle of my journey...
Considering my last teaser was really long, I've made today's very short.
Background info: Uncle Yashpal gave Giaan a bag and a phone and instructions to board bus 245.
Let me know what you think! Cheers ;)
What's going to be on the bus? Where is it taking him? C'mon Giaan, get off the flattened carton and find out! :)Great tease!
Awww :( I feel so worried about him! And also yes, want to know what will happen on the bus... Though I feel like getting on it might be a bad idea for him <.<
I waited all week for this tease, and OF COURSE, you left me wanting more and more! There's tons of emotion in this scene, I loved it.
Man, poor guy! He's got a lot going on. Like Kathy, I wanna know what's on the bus, where is ahe going, and what has brought him to this point. EESH, poor guy!! the ending is awesome with the ground spinning and all and him trying to get a hold of his emotions.
Oh nooo! I'm so in love with Giaan. I think I said this last week but I just want to wrap him up and hug him. Poor guy. I just love the opening paragraph. So evocative.
I was so excited to read another tease from this! I'm still so curious about all of this; you have me so hooked and dying to read more. This was so poignant too, the ending especially hurt my heart. Amazing tease!
oh, jeesh! what next?!?! tell me!
Oooh I want to know what happens next! Awesome tease! :D
Oh, god, what's going on?
oh wow! This seems like a really emotional scene!!
Okay so now I'm seriously hanging! Whats next???!??!?! LOL Your snippets are always great! Keep up the awesome work!
Keep it clean and constructive. Thanks.