Tuesday, 27 July 2010

Teaser Tuesday

The end is coming.

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*Gone with the wind*

Snippet Ends.

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8 comments:

  1. Anonymous27 July 2010 at 13:14

    I like the friendship in this. Julian read him so easily. :)

    This snippet makes me ask so many questions that I really want to go on.

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  2. Bidisha27 July 2010 at 16:59

    I like the relationship dynamics between the two. It's warm and original and also very real.
    I'm interested in reading on :))

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  3. Unknown27 July 2010 at 17:02

    The end is near? really? really? I just love your teases, but I'm wondering so many things about how things are going to end for giaan and every other character we'd met in the past snips. I'll be sad when you stop teasing this :(

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  4. Cheyanne27 July 2010 at 18:14

    I love all of these teases. The tension and emotion in this scene is great. And I love seeing how Giaan has evolved over the weeks.

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  5. Angie27 July 2010 at 19:15

    I second the tension in this, the little things that Julian does to show he's nervous. Can't wait to see what happens next. :)

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  6. Phoebe North28 July 2010 at 03:50

    This interaction is so vividly rendered--wonderful. Can I just say that I've loved watching not only your character grow, but your writing? I mean that in the best possible way--your stuff is increasingly solid. Nice work!

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  7. Marieke28 July 2010 at 20:15

    This is really very nice :)

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  8. Karla Calalang2 August 2010 at 21:46

    Oh wow. I am LOVING this WIP. SO good.

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