I'm on the road with my dream in a cart, pulling it along into reality. This is the chronicle of my journey...
Argh! I don't want Giaan to be a million pieces of baked flesh scattered across the street! Someone save him!
Eek. Oh no! How did he get himself into all this trouble? Great descriptions as always.
How does that ever end well, the confession that you have a bomb? Do they give you credit for adding, "But I decided not to use it?" Can't wait to see if he tells Julian, and what Julian's reaction will be.
YOWZA!Tense scene and I find myself caring about these characters and wanting to read on!
Ohh this is so interesting. I hope that he can somehow get rid of the bomb! I'd hate for him to die :( (Well, obviously he won't die lol but still)
Love the descriptions--especially in the last paragraph! I could really see the church in my head.
Gosh, your writing is really gorgeous in this. Incredible voice.
Keep it clean and constructive. Thanks.