Tuesday 6 April 2010

Teaser Tuesday ... Interrupted

This is a teaser tuesday post. Sorry, forgot to add that bit cos I was testing blogging via a new device at my friend's place.

So, what's going on here? It's an unpublished blogpost by a certain character in my book. I decided to shift from Giaan and give you guys this. I hope you like it.

Snippet starts:

*Snip snip*

Snippet ends.

14 comments:

  1. Very well done!! Though I must admit to being confused.

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  2. WHAAAAAT. I was SO confused. I thought it was you talking at the beginning, but now I realize it was all a part of the teaser. This is awesome! :D <3

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  3. LOL I second the comments above me. Awesome teaser! Though I did miss Giaan

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  4. Haha yeah, my mistake. I've corrected that. For anyone reading, note: I'm not getting killed or anything! That's a character's unpublished blogpost lol

    I'll get back to Giaan in a bit, Marilyn ;)

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  5. Haven't done Teaser Tuesday in forever so I don't know Giaan, but this was very interesting and full of emotion for our failed narrator.

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  6. oh wow! now, I'm scared of the one-eyed man...*hides under desk*

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  7. Oh yes, I liked this. I'm rooting for him to find a way to be a hero against the one-eyed man!

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  8. Comments are not a fan of me today. If I posted twice...sorry.

    Very interesting!!

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  9. I was confused too. Thanks for the clarification. I'm curious about how the one-eyed man is controlling the entire neighborhood and why.

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  10. The descriptions are just so incredible here. I can feel every single moment with the narrator.

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  11. Awesome blogpost...and this character is in the story your snips with Giaan are from? So cool! :)

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  12. Yes, Debra, the character is in the story that Giaan is in. He leaves that letter on his desk before something bad happens to him and one of Giaan's friends finds it

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  13. I liked this line very much: My heart lies scattered about my feet, a shattered vase.

    But great snippet! And great antagonist!!! Awesome characters, fantabulous writing, -and- and an awesome villain? You've got a gift, my friend! I want to know more about the one-eyed man.

    Very, very interesting.

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  14. I really really like it! Your writing is so much fun to read!

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