Tuesday, 20 April 2010

Teaser Tuesday

Today's teaser continues from last week's. Enjoy!

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12 comments:

  1. "Giaan needed more than just words to stand toe-to-toe with the man. He needed an impenetrable poise ... and probably a bulletproof vest on top of that" - Love it!
    Your descriptions and the flow of the third person pov really amaze me every single time. Awesome tease!

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  2. Loved this! This bit made me LOL: It was as if the man had installed a "Giaan Alarm" to inform him of Giaan's presence outside his house.

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  3. I'm really interested in the characters here. Forbidden relationships are my fave.

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  4. Okay, this might sound weird, but I really appreciate the varied sentence structures in this. It makes the prose smooth and inviting.

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  5. Hah, I loved this! I thought it was really funny. The image of Giaan looking frightened under Mr. Diggavi's stare--hilarious! I think it's because I've always pictured him (from the snippets you've posted) as fearless.

    Awesome tease! :D

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  6. All the names made this a little difficult to follow, but definitely worth it. Liked the Giaan alarm!

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  7. Crazy dads, eh. "Giaan Alarm" Heh.

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  8. Remilda, yeah, Giaan is pictured as fearless by his friends as well. Hopefully, if i do get to put up a teaser that's written in Jon's POV you'll see how people see Giaan.

    Corrine lol Giaan is a pakistani name, as his parents are from Pakistan. And Aletea is an Indian name, as she's half Indian. She has an English name too, but I can't remember. It's in my outline file ;)

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  9. Glen, just gave you an award on my blog!=)

    Cheerios!

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  10. HA this was great! You always pull me in with your teasers! Great job, can't wait to see how it goes.

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  11. I loved this, you pulled me in so quickly it was addicting!!! I can't wait to see how it goes! I came to visit on the right day!!

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