Tuesday, 23 March 2010

Teaser Tuesday

It's that time of the week again, and I've got my teaser ready your consumption. This teaser is a continuation of last week's, though you will find that time has jumped a bit. Whereas last week we saw Giaan and his brother, Raza, in 2007, today's teaser puts Giaan in 2009.

Enjoy.

Snippet starts:

*Snip snip!*

Snippet ends.

Well, looks like my boy, Giaan, is having a pretty awesome day. *Sigh* Too bad it doesn't last.
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12 comments:

  1. Véro L23 March 2010 at 16:48

    I love the chemistry between the characters. I'm very intrigued!

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  2. Karla Calalang23 March 2010 at 17:25

    WHY DID YOU HAVE TO SAY THAT LAST LINE AFTER YOUR SNIPPET. NOW I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!

    /caps

    hehe

    I love it. Great voice, dialogue, characterization. Everything. Awesome snip!

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  3. LizPage23 March 2010 at 20:18

    Love the interaction between the characters! So cool.

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  4. J.S. Wood24 March 2010 at 03:05

    Too bad it doesn't last?!?!? That's a tease. Poor guy, I still feel for him. NIce writing :)

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  5. Annie McElfresh24 March 2010 at 05:08

    Dang! I thought things we going pretty good...until I read your little tease at the very end! What's next???? LOL

    Great snip :)

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  6. Vee24 March 2010 at 11:10

    How dare you tell me it doesn't last and then not tell me what goes wrong?! Tease ;)

    Great dialogue and characterisation, as always.

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  7. Unknown24 March 2010 at 15:41

    As always, awesome snip...but I'm not happy with you for that last little aside. It doesn't last?!? Way to be a tease! lol

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  8. Rebecca A. Rogers24 March 2010 at 16:25

    Definitely a teaser! I thought the dialogue was great!

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  9. Writing Writerly things24 March 2010 at 20:28

    Oh you tease! Loved this, great dialogue!

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  10. Remilda Graystone24 March 2010 at 20:47

    I agree with Karla. Great everything. I. Love. Your. Style. *slightly green with envy* The chemistry between the two characters is great.

    Can't wait to read more!

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  11. Glen Akin25 March 2010 at 00:37

    aww thanks, you guys. Lol here, Giaan's gonna have a really tough time as the episode progresses. I feel bad for him, but hey, I'm still better than most of you lot! I read your teasers and the things you put your MCs through? Sadistic writers lol

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  12. Angie25 March 2010 at 12:01

    I love your writing style. I'm kind of coming into the middle of this, so I don't know what going on, but you definitely have me intrigued with the whole killer father thing and what's going to happen to Giaan next. Love the name, btw. Keep up the awesome work!

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