tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-442713635193021491.post6048986336334077868..comments2023-05-05T08:35:01.986+01:00Comments on Say it isn't so: Teaser TuesdayGlen Akinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09647296775230237162noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-442713635193021491.post-37304214054630127852010-02-02T22:09:19.339+00:002010-02-02T22:09:19.339+00:00Great voice here! It comes through so clear even i...Great voice here! It comes through so clear even in third person.<br />awesome snippet.LizPagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07863167617453436250noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-442713635193021491.post-64862897761433822882010-01-31T20:29:23.669+00:002010-01-31T20:29:23.669+00:00David's voice pops!! Nice work :DDavid's voice pops!! Nice work :DAnnie McElfreshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14312634754232333138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-442713635193021491.post-80428075568327633292010-01-27T18:52:33.459+00:002010-01-27T18:52:33.459+00:00I just love David's voice, from his inner mono...I just love David's voice, from his inner monologues to his insults to Elle. This was a fun read...and the boy, Jon? Whew! He was intriguing from the moment he entered and now, I want to know more! great snip :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13612218172442721987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-442713635193021491.post-38860621279759730802010-01-27T14:46:03.426+00:002010-01-27T14:46:03.426+00:00This is so well-written. You've been able to c...This is so well-written. You've been able to convey your characters' voices extremely well. I can feel a clear distinction between David and Elle's already. I wonder what's going on here, it really kept me hooked!Bidishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17382938442171208326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-442713635193021491.post-91632914516344302312010-01-27T07:53:38.518+00:002010-01-27T07:53:38.518+00:00I laughed aloud when I read 'It's a flippi...I laughed aloud when I read 'It's a flipping mask, you miserable, old git'. Haha!!! Very intriguing snip. I totally want you to continue on from this next week!Kathy Bradeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01370707259209847339noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-442713635193021491.post-49306775989533850182010-01-27T02:26:41.486+00:002010-01-27T02:26:41.486+00:00Hooked. You have an amazing skill for dialogue, it...Hooked. You have an amazing skill for dialogue, it was so... flowy, I guess is the right word? Lol. Nice snip.bclement412https://www.blogger.com/profile/05104255054978064868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-442713635193021491.post-35441931954225274882010-01-27T01:58:15.662+00:002010-01-27T01:58:15.662+00:00Interesting snippet. I like how Jon comes across a...Interesting snippet. I like how Jon comes across as the perfect victim and then ends up breaking the box, apparently trying to steal the box. I have a soft spot for characters that act completely contrary to how we expect them to. Now I want to know what Jon's deal is. Also, Elle's dream of "King Tut" entertained me :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-442713635193021491.post-11579031993322785152010-01-27T01:50:13.074+00:002010-01-27T01:50:13.074+00:00Wow! I was completely hooked! I love how strongly ...Wow! I was completely hooked! I love how strongly David's voice came through even with third person! Very nice! I want to read further!VĂ©ro Lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02437660016137470145noreply@blogger.com